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The Fakes about Humanity

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I hate humanity,
They have no sanity.
They kill each other,
They hurt their mother.

Blood sky,
Falling knifes.
Falling down and killing lives.
Humans are lost with-in there lies.

Pain and suffering all around,
Bloodshed on the ground.
They kill for fun,
They kill till there's none.
Till their lust becomes undone.

They hurt and kill
Just for the trill.
They destroy what they don't understand
Just read what the British did to the Indians.
Most of their hearts are black
And those are the facts.
So this poem is not against the British, I'm half British myself. I'm just stating a fact.

The high number of humanity, destroy what they don't understand. Like stoning people cause they are different religion or cause they had sex out of married. These things are all wrong and it show how chaotic we are.

Parents hurt their kids physically and mentally (tell them that they wish they were never born).

The “Mother” in the poem is the “Earth” cause also with all the war and killing that is going on it is also killing the Earth.

The falling knife we've all felt at one point, if not more in our life. When you hear people gossiping about you and it's all lies. I've made another poem just on gossip called "She who lives so alone" the lies were so bad and so much that the girl couldn't taking it at the end so she killed herself.

That whole saying that:
"Stones may brake my bones,
But words will never hurt me"
Is so wrong, because at the end of the day the broken bones will heal but the words will stay with a person forever.

So did this poem to point a few facts about us out.
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And yes I know it's a DARK out look.

I wasn't sure to submit this cause it's a bit hard core.
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So I guess I'm ready for bad comments.
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Michel-le-fou's avatar
[I just chatted with someone on line about the "spelling error" thing. It is often enough but I don't care. The poem is all sensational for several reasons: 1. the rhyme is very good and correct, and not trite. furthermore, you changed the pattern at whim, which I liked. 2. the subject IS true. #. The length of lines and the poem in general is good. Fuck spelling for now.